Hi I Wrote This Poem For A Girl I Care Deeply For? I Would Really Like To Know What All The Girls Think?
I’m going to be sincerely honest with you, and I mean every word. The feelings I’m experiencing aren’t pretentious, they are coming from my soul, which is causing my heart to pump a mile a minute whenever I see you. I’m writing you this to explain more in depth how I feel. I’m extremely timid, but for you I’m willing to walk barefoot in scorching heat, face the fierce wind of a tornado head on to protect you, through the Sahara in search of water to quench your thirst, confront the wrath of the sea with you as my lighthouse guiding me back to where I belong which is with you. You are my strength that keeps me from falling, and shows me the true meaning of life. You are the person who I can trust unconditionally and whom can expect the same from me in return. To me you’re a treasure that can’t be measured. You represent a gorgeous butterfly that has recently shed from its cocoon, and has attained unparalleled beauty. You’re the reason I get up in the morning. To me your sense of pride is awe inspiring, and your boldness tremendously empowering. I’m like the beast in beauty and the beast compared to your hypnotizing beauty not just on the outside, the inside as well. Your illustrious exterior is only rivaled by that of your benevolent gentleness on the inside. That mesmerizing hair is like the Corona, not the beer kind, but that which is the hottest component of the sun. If you want I can be your shoulder with which you can cry on, and your faithful jester when you’re feeling down. I can be your pillar of strength that makes you feel calm and secure when your feeling frightened. The man that if given the chance can illuminate your life just like meeting you has brightened mine more than all of the lights of this world ever could. I’m the type of guy that will listen when you speak, and speak when you want to listen. You’re my Ying and I can be your Yang if you wish. To me your like a flower that even Mother Nature would be envious of. When you talk to me I hear melodies of an angel sent from above. Your determination shows me that you’re willing to face anything without batting an eye and help others when they’re in need. In those phenomenal emerald eyes I see kindness that if let out could stop conflicts of any shape or form. Your sweet interior is so indescribable that not even the Seven Wonders of the World put together could scratch the surface. When I see you its as if cupid has struck me with all his arrows a million times over. I’m the type of guy that is willing to defend you like an adamant shield, and treat you like a queen, which you rightfully deserve. I’m the blanket that comforts you when you’re feeling cold or your fan when you’re feeling warm. I’m the water that dissapates all your sorrows. I can be your legs when you aren’t able to walk and your hands when you want something done. The chef for when you desire anything or your own personal taste tester. I’m the round the clock nurse that won’t leave your side when you’re sick and will nurse you back to health. Your pain is my pain; your victories are my victories. This is how I feel, and it is not my intention to persuade you, it is to show you that I am someone that cares immensely for you and knows how to value a woman.
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aww that is a sweet poem.
i think she will like it and it will make her heart melt.
good luck
wow, thats amazing:) i’m a songwriter, and its hard for me to come across a guy that can write like this, so kudos to you!!! one suggestion i would make, is to take out or edit the part about her hair, you can say something like, “your hair shines in beauty, and makes any day brighter”
wow that is hot: I especaly liked the part If you want I can be your shoulder with which you can cry on, and your faithful jester when you’re feeling down. wow she is lucky