Witch Poem Should I Send Into The Poem Contest?
1.Super dad
Your the bomb,
And the match,
You make me smile and Laugh,
Your the greatest and the bestest,
Dad around,
You work,
You clean,
You do everything,
You may even sing,
I believe you are super dad,
You believe you are dad,
Super dad is more for you,
Because you do everything and more,
You love,
You care,
You work so hard,
You feed me,
You help me,
You listen to me,
You help me with my worst problems,
And I now tell you thank you,
I may not tell you everyday that you are super dad,
But in your heart you know it just like me,
You are super dad and always will be,
No matter what happens You keep the title super dad,
Because I bought it for you,
Ok OK you earned it,
Everyday you earn it everyday you live up to it
I love you super dad
2. Sea of love
I am Lost,
Lost in the sea of love and dreams.
I gently float down,
The pure pink sea,
I dream of you,
About the love I have for you,
I wait for the sea to end,
But it never doe
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4. Love Spell
Confused,
I love the one I love,
But is it true I love you too?,
I’m I blind?,
Have you blinded me?,
You have put me under your spell,
How do I escape from you,
I am looking for a way out,
For we can never be,
Let me go from under you spell,
I whisper please,
For I love another,
I have fallen under your spell,
And I may never return,
For this I am stuck loving you
3. Your Deadly Musical Voice
The gently sound of your voice,
It is so sweet and welcoming,
Your Voice makes me melt in your hands,
You may not know this you may be clueless,
But I am not,
I hear your musical voice,
And I think How can I escapes it,
I feel like I have to leave,
You are just to lovely to escape from my love,
You have captured my heart with your voice and your beauty,
I just can not seem to escape you,
I love you my baby boy.
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5.Tears
I look at you with tears,
I look at you with longing,
Every moment I spend with you I come to love you more,
The time we have is small,
So I keep it as a treasure,
My tears for you I spill in my soul,
I spill them when I am alone,
I smile at you,
And sometimes you smile back,
Is it friendly or love smile?
I sometimes feel like a bomb,
I want to explode,
Show you how I feel,
But I do not think we can be,
I wish we could but you see me as a kid,
I want to run up and place a kiss on those lips of heaven,
To feel you warm soft lips,
I love you
I want you,
I spill love tears all over,
Hoping someday you will come to love me too.
(Sorry if there is alot of miss spelling befor I send the poem in I will do speel check and everything)
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I love # 5 the most. It reminds me of my own relationship. Ya put #5 in the contest. Theyre all good too!
Either 2 or 3.
You need to go back and check them though. there’s a lot of grammatical errors.
Seriously, before you send ANY of those in, you REALLY need to correct all your mistakes. Theres a lot of them!
No offense, but the first one sucks…
I think they’re all lovely. You should enter each and everyone of them in. Keep writing.